A Sudden Thirst

From the hose held in once strong hands,
comes pouring like the rain,
a shower of pure and cool delight,
for those who lie and wait.

The grass below has surely seen
this scene a hundred times;
the old man comes and tends to them
without fail, always at nine.

He used to drift most fluidly
between rough trunk and rosy tree;
but when today he placed his feet,
his sundry gait mis-stepped a beat.

And looking up they seemed to see
a tired man at best;
off from his brow went to the ground,
a great few beads of sweat.

They fell and bounced upon the leaves
and danced between them wilfully,
until this last and little drop
was gently laid down near his feet.

It was its final
resting
spot.

Hurriedly upon this treat,
now thirsty grass swallowed wholly
the remainder of this last bead,
trying relentlessly to capture its entirety.

That little glass bead,
that dose of quenching utility;
it accepted with glee,
for it could not see
or say undoubtedly,

that he would return
once again, tomorrow.

- by Paul Immanuel (Thambu)
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Sreelatha D says...

Like father like son

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Sandeep C says...

Superb. Well written Thambu.

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Lybu Kuruvilla says...

Brilliant Thambu ! Keep writing and posting much so that we miss you less here.

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Binu says...

Superb

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Sindhu S says...

Well written

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Indira says...

touching! Thambu! keep weaving your world of wonderful words.

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Daniel J says...

Beautiful poem!

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Swapna T says...

Beautiful & touching..

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Susan G says...

Beautifully written. I am reminded of Ecclesiastes 12 - 'At that time your arms will shake and your legs will become weak. Your teeth will fall out so you cannot chew, and your eyes will not see clearly.'

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Sridhar P says...

I love your son's style..he should serioulsy continue to write..

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Satish M says...

love it!

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Priya S says...

All strong hands will weaken, and the legs will falter..nice poem.

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Mathew V says...

Beautiful poem!

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Indrani S says...

Very touching.

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Anthony S says...

Wonderful lines.

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Alex S says...

'He used to drift most fluidly between rough trunk and rosy tree'.. that has a Wordsworthy feel to it!!

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Rani P says...

Well written..

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Manu V K says...

Beautiful!