Excellent Poetry Dinu, you taught them to fly on their own and let them fly away from you, sweet memories of their growing up days makes you feel lonely, glad that you and Preethi are so good hearted, working on to fill the empty nest with two new birds, Congratulation, so proud of you both, wish you two all the best, Bbychachen
Thank you Dinu, for this beautiful poem. A heartwarming and sincere expression of loving thoughts and memories, put across so eloquently! Every parent can identify with it.
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Excellent piece - very touching
Excellent Poetry Dinu, you taught them to fly on their own and let them fly away from you, sweet memories of their growing up days makes you feel lonely, glad that you and Preethi are so good hearted, working on to fill the empty nest with two new birds, Congratulation, so proud of you both, wish you two all the best, Bbychachen
Touching and heartfelt
Beautiful poem that talks about a harsh reality - and the recitation helps to drive it down further. Thanks Dinu, please do keep writing.
Thank you Dinu, for this beautiful poem. A heartwarming and sincere expression of loving thoughts and memories, put across so eloquently! Every parent can identify with it.
Dinu! Really nice. Cycle of life...I dread the day and i know its on its way.
Here's another one on the same theme
https://www.theoverbridge.com/have-you-watched-yourself-walking-away
Very well expressed
Beautifully written Dinu heart feels heavier knowing that this reality is going to hit me hard soon.
Very well expressed! Nice one Dinu
Very nice Dinu.. Reality
indeed..one that most of us will have to face..
Dinu, such a beautiful expression of what is in store for all of us
very well written
Excellent piece.
"കൊഴിഞ്ഞു വീണതാം തൂവലുകൾ, കൂട്ടിനുള്ളിൽ വെറും ഓർമകളായി" - beautiful and touching!
Beautifully written! Keep writing. Would love to hear you recite this!
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നമുക്കും ഒന്ന് പറന്നുപോയി നോക്കിയാലോ
മനസിലായില്ല - "നമുക്ക്" എന്ന് വെച്ചാൽ എന്താ ഉദ്ദേശിച്ചത് ?
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Part of the cycle - our parents experienced it - now its our turn
true - we didn't realize it then..
too good
Its that time for all of us, similar thoughts, similar sentiments
Indeed..
The translation helped - thanks
The translation was done by my sister.
Loved it Keep writing
Lovely poem..
Lovely
Loved it, Dinu
very thought provoking..
Beautifully expressed!
Beautiful poem
brilliant!
Very well expressed.. Dinu
Truly inspiring
Brilliant!